So interesting for me, how the image at the top sets the tone for my read of your poem, and when I read through again, without looking at the image, the mood, the emotion is so different. It’s a difference in temperatures, I think. I love how you are re-posting previously published poetry here, with images, just as Sherry O’Keefe has been doing lately on her own site. I may follow suit :-) Beautiful poem ~
Thank you all! So nice. I am still working my way around the carnival, leisurely journey-like…. :) Thanks Dorothee, for doing such a great job. And yes, I think you’re right re temperatures. I do have fun with (matching) pics and poems, find it most interesting to think about….
“it was everything in its particulars” — loved this, Rose!
Words and picture – both lovely and I will come back to savour more than once.
i keep returning to these lines – and the rebar. all these things in the making, and beyond it, this perfect moment of stillness.
getting to know your poetry has added extra rebar to my life. you know i love this.
So interesting for me, how the image at the top sets the tone for my read of your poem, and when I read through again, without looking at the image, the mood, the emotion is so different. It’s a difference in temperatures, I think. I love how you are re-posting previously published poetry here, with images, just as Sherry O’Keefe has been doing lately on her own site. I may follow suit :-) Beautiful poem ~
Thank you all! So nice. I am still working my way around the carnival, leisurely journey-like…. :) Thanks Dorothee, for doing such a great job. And yes, I think you’re right re temperatures. I do have fun with (matching) pics and poems, find it most interesting to think about….
I love the poem, it offers something new with every reading.
Thank you Brigita! :)