great angle and intensity, both in the photo and the poem. and then the ending, this perfect twist: “he is both/and/or / one thing and then the other.”
Thank you lovelies! Thanks for reading, and for your comments. :) I haven’t finished going around the carnival yet, but have been enjoying it muchly :) so far!
Fotos 
so first i like the many layers in “this poem took place”.
and then second, this plunge that happens as soon as i step into the poem.
what a fine thing, this photo + this poem + this plunge.
sherry
Great poem. I, too, love the layers of meaning. As I read it I was transported there at that moment.
Lovely, both the photo and the poem.
Strong and powerful… love the change of tone, too. Glad to be a part of the carnival with you!
great angle and intensity, both in the photo and the poem. and then the ending, this perfect twist: “he is both/and/or / one thing and then the other.”
Thank you lovelies! Thanks for reading, and for your comments. :) I haven’t finished going around the carnival yet, but have been enjoying it muchly :) so far!
A powerful combination of the image and poem.
Thank you Brigita. :)